torsdag 4 december 2008
Capture the attention of your audience
Tell the story from "An outdoor experience" to two friends, one at the time. What words and gestures (or lack of) increased your presence in your story? Is the result any different if you added details from your senses (hearing, touch, taste, smell and sight). Now tell your story to a third friend and watch the results. Review your story again. Work on the punchline. By the way, what is your punchline? Leave a comment.
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What is the punchline of your story in one sentence? Leave a comment here.
"I know that this trip is very dangerous, but the energy that we can feel there worth it!!"
It´s the last sentence of my "Powerful outdoor experience". Very strange for a security professional, but real for my life!!
"When I found myself looking through my doughter's eyes and saw me standing in front of her, I found how fat I was and how proud I am of being her father."
This is my punchline, just imagine yourself watching, feeling and experiencing the world through a child's eye.
Although the weather was rather extreme I would'nt want to have missed it!
Refers to a walk on the beach in stormy weather. The wind pushed us forwards, sometimes we unwantedly ended up running.
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